There are a few typographical choices I was wondering if you are open to feedback on?
Thanks for the feedback!
For every new version I have to redo the layout, and as you can imagine I don't want to take forever doing that (anymore), since inevitably there will be another version where the current layout often doesn't work anymore. (And updating the actual content takes so long now.)
- page 3; promos column is very empty, and hard to read. Why not list them like the expansions? There’s also space to list the update packs
This part was recently moved, I used to have everything on one page. So yes, it can be listed differently now, thanks.
- page 5; if emargo tokens is placed after VP tokens, there’s not an orphan line.
Good idea.
- page 8; there should be a comment on the fact that big-box comes with more treasure, but not as much as two sets. If I remember, dxv ruled ”play with all treasures availiable”.
Yeah, maybe. There are several different big boxes, and I don't know the contents of them all. Feels a little "beyond the scope", but if somebody could provide me with the information, I would add it.
- page 8-11; if you are open to listen the cards not in release order, or move promos to when they were released, there might be less orphan/widow/split sections in special setup.
I really think release order is best though.
- page 16; there’s second column fits in the first.
It's intentional, but it looks a bit better if it's further down the page than now (it kind of "belongs" to the next chapter).
- page 26; i didn’t read the examples here, but it feels like either fewer (so no page 26) or more examples (less white-space) would be nice. If it’s out of scope, I understand.
You should see version 10.0! It fit so perfectly! But I think I can break the previous sections differently so that "Lose track" takes up all of page 26.
-page38-39; there’s an orphan row that would resolve if the columnbreak on page 38 is removed.
-page 40; there’s a widow - end turn should be on next page.
I see that this section slipped through the cracks.
I had planned to rework the layout a bit more.
Page 40 is a no-brainer. Page 39 is tough - I don't want to start a column with an indented dash, which would be the case if I remove the column break on page 38. In any case, the next version will probably have more text in each section, so I'll have to look at it again then.
-page 56-169; you suddenly treat everything as 1 section. I would have prefered page- and columnbreaks more often for fewer orphans and widows.
It adds three pages to the document. I'm not sure if that's worth it (some people print this thing). That section is a reference; you look up a card like in an encyclopedia. It doesn't feel like it needs to be broken per paragraph...