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Re: Weekly Design Contest #201: Expand the Kingdom
« Reply #25 on: October 12, 2023, 03:08:09 pm »
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It should have an "or reveals their hand" honesty check clause if they cannot discard a Collateral. Unfortunately, that adds a lot of words.
Ahh, does "if possible" not do enough here? With "or reveals a hand with no Collateral" in the FAQ?
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Re: Weekly Design Contest #201: Expand the Kingdom
« Reply #26 on: October 12, 2023, 03:14:29 pm »
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It should have an "or reveals their hand" honesty check clause if they cannot discard a Collateral. Unfortunately, that adds a lot of words.
Ahh, does "if possible" not do enough here? With "or reveals a hand with no Collateral" in the FAQ?

Villain uses “(or reveals they can't).”  There aren’t any official cards that use “if possible.”
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Re: Weekly Design Contest #201: Expand the Kingdom
« Reply #27 on: October 12, 2023, 03:38:15 pm »
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It's a little wordy and complex for my taste, but I'm pretty happy with it.
The part of the card not involving Collateral tried out a few different bonuses, but I couldn't come up with one that really worked until now. The card really wanted to be a $5 and none of the vanillas really fit.
It'd be fun to see Settlers or Gardens or something as the Collateral; lots of variety there.
Terminal 4 Coins Silver junker with a discard Attack? Does too much and is too strong.
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Re: Weekly Design Contest #201: Expand the Kingdom
« Reply #28 on: October 15, 2023, 03:36:09 pm »
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At worst, +1 Buy and gain a card costing up to $3. At best, it can do a lot more for you. Simple, but doesn't need to be complicated.

Clarification: The "buy a card from the Supply" is not optional, but doesn't cost a Buy.
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Re: Weekly Design Contest #201: Expand the Kingdom
« Reply #29 on: October 15, 2023, 08:19:37 pm »
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My new submission


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Metal Worker | Action | $5
Trash a card from your hand and gain a card costing up to $2 more than it.

When you gain this, gain a Metal
Setup: Add an extra kingdom pile costing $2 or $3 to the supply. Its cards are Metals.

A remodel that comes with something to remodel. A $3 is good because you can remodel it to 5 costs. A 2 is good because it gives you something in the supply to remodel your coppers into. And if it's a card you don't want to trash, well then you get one for free when you get a Metal Worker!


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Re: Weekly Design Contest #201: Expand the Kingdom
« Reply #30 on: October 16, 2023, 03:00:24 am »
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The winner is Pied Piper by SignError.

Full judgement will come whenever I have time for it.
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Re: Weekly Design Contest #201: Expand the Kingdom
« Reply #31 on: October 16, 2023, 10:24:40 am »
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Thanks for the great contest and the win.  I’ll get the next contest up later today, but as a sneak peak, it will have something to do with the card Rats.

Edit:  Actually, I changed my mind.  There’s a new errata coming, so let’s do a contest for that.
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