http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/610514
I made this. I think the viola staccato is too loud, but other than that, how's it sound?
I didn't think the violas were too loud at all - they provide the rhythmic drive given that there were no drums (at least early). In fact I thought the mix overall was pretty superb, and I was listening through tiny little computer speakers. A possible exception was at about the 2:10 or 2:20 mark, during the crescendo phase, the staccato actually got a little lost, and I missed them because they formed (for me) the theme of the piece.
I read your comments but not the commenters' comments. You think "the ending is too short". I don't think it ended too suddenly, if that is what you meant by "too short". If instead you mean "not fully formed" then I think that depends on what (if anything) the piece is to be used for.
I liked it a lot, and I am a former (part time) musician. How was it created? All synths?