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My Mockups of the Contest Cards
« on: December 17, 2016, 02:12:44 pm »
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I've mocked up all of the cards for the newest Treasure Chest expansion (except for Diviner, which already had a mockup). I've modified the wording on some of the cards to make them more closely match official cards, but their functionality remains unchanged. The format [name 1] --> [name 2] means that the name was originally [name 1], but I changed it to [name 2] because the original name is now the name of an official card.

Indulgence

Metropolis

Mountain Dweller

Troglodyte Caves

Mortuary

Renovate

Recycle

Observatory seems a bit too similar to Raze.

Prefecture

Landlord

Storyteller --> Bard

Incantation

Research

Druid

Elixir

Enclave

Barber

Porter

Dancer

Royal Guard

Town Hall

Magic Lamp

Stalwart Mule

Servicemen

Golden Hammer

Wizard

Royal Tutor

Fishmonger

Collector

Tinker
« Last Edit: December 17, 2016, 03:00:56 pm by Gubump »
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Re: My Mockups of the Contest Cards
« Reply #1 on: December 17, 2016, 04:43:34 pm »
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Nice! I appreciate you going through and providing alternate versions of the cards I did and doing some of the rest. A few notes:

-The art you picked for indulgences is fine I guess, but I don't really think it fits the given name.
-Metropolis wasn't actually a winner, but I was going to mock it up anyway sometime so thanks.
-I changed Mortuary based on some feedback (It's more dark-ages if it can trash Shelters), but it's nice to have the original too.
-There's already a card named Renovate in the Treasure chest FYI, it's an Event. I don't know if you care.
-Observatory is strictly worse than Raze. I mean I can't and wouldn't stop you from using it just IDK who would.
-Prefecture I did under (very slightly) a different name.
-I already did Storyteller under the name Ehalcyon suggested (I may have tweaked it?).
-Asper still has his mock-up of Incantation. No offense but I think it's better, and it's the creator's mock-up.
-I have a mock-up for Elixir if you care.
-Barber did originally cost , but play with it and you'll realize that it doesn't work there at all. is a good price.
-I mocked up the Prizes too if you care.

All in all, I think it's great that you did the cards that lost the run-off. Some of the differences from mine (Barber at , Recycle's name, Bard's name, etc.) were all changed based on some feedback from the community. I'd suggest you into that. A few cards (Elixir, the Prizes, Incantation) already have suitable mock-ups that are less typoed. I just don't see the point of redoing them other than to keep them consistent with your other cards.

Finally, I really don't want you to take this as "You suck my mock-ups are better and more official/important/awesome." Sorry if it comes across that way. IDK if it does but just making sure so I don't start any flame wars  ;D.
« Last Edit: December 17, 2016, 05:45:17 pm by ThetaSigma12 »
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Re: My Mockups of the Contest Cards
« Reply #2 on: December 17, 2016, 08:18:52 pm »
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Nice! I appreciate you going through and providing alternate versions of the cards I did and doing some of the rest. A few notes:

-The art you picked for indulgences is fine I guess, but I don't really think it fits the given name.
-Metropolis wasn't actually a winner, but I was going to mock it up anyway sometime so thanks.
-I changed Mortuary based on some feedback (It's more dark-ages if it can trash Shelters), but it's nice to have the original too.
-There's already a card named Renovate in the Treasure chest FYI, it's an Event. I don't know if you care.
-Observatory is strictly worse than Raze. I mean I can't and wouldn't stop you from using it just IDK who would.
-Prefecture I did under (very slightly) a different name.
-I already did Storyteller under the name Ehalcyon suggested (I may have tweaked it?).
-Asper still has his mock-up of Incantation. No offense but I think it's better, and it's the creator's mock-up.
-I have a mock-up for Elixir if you care.
-Barber did originally cost , but play with it and you'll realize that it doesn't work there at all. is a good price.
-I mocked up the Prizes too if you care.

All in all, I think it's great that you did the cards that lost the run-off. Some of the differences from mine (Barber at , Recycle's name, Bard's name, etc.) were all changed based on some feedback from the community. I'd suggest you into that. A few cards (Elixir, the Prizes, Incantation) already have suitable mock-ups that are less typoed. I just don't see the point of redoing them other than to keep them consistent with your other cards.

Finally, I really don't want you to take this as "You suck my mock-ups are better and more official/important/awesome." Sorry if it comes across that way. IDK if it does but just making sure so I don't start any flame wars  ;D.

Thanks for the feedback. What typos were in my mockups?
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Re: My Mockups of the Contest Cards
« Reply #3 on: December 17, 2016, 08:32:04 pm »
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Generally, a comma is needed before the "to", i.e. ", to". There were a few more, but mainly due to the Fan card generator.
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