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Dominion => Weekly Design Contest => Variants and Fan Cards => Mini-Set Design Contest => Topic started by: Gubump on December 17, 2016, 02:12:44 pm
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I've mocked up all of the cards for the newest Treasure Chest expansion (except for Diviner, which already had a mockup). I've modified the wording on some of the cards to make them more closely match official cards, but their functionality remains unchanged. The format [name 1] --> [name 2] means that the name was originally [name 1], but I changed it to [name 2] because the original name is now the name of an official card.
Indulgence (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Indulgence&description=%242%0A%2B1%20Buy%0AWhen%20you%20play%20this%2C%20the%20player%20to%20your%20left%20chooses%20a%20card%20in%20the%20Supply%20costing%20from%20%243%20to%20%246.%20When%20you%20buy%20a%20copy%20of%20that%20card%20this%20turn%2C%20%2B%202%25.&type=Treasure&price=%245&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.royalmint.com%2F~%2Fmedia%2FImages%2FBullion%2520Microsite%2Fwholesale_banner.jpg&color0=1&color1=0)
Metropolis (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Metropolis&description=%2B1%20Card%0A%2B2%20Actions%0ATreasure%20cards%20other%20than%20Copper%20produce%20an%20extra%20%241%20this%20turn.&type=Action&price=%247&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2Foriginals%2Ff8%2Fde%2F54%2Ff8de54817a873c1a47d992b9d7b7f215.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Mountain Dweller (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Mountain%20Dweller&description=%2B1%20Card%0A%2B1%20Action%0AReveal%20your%20hand.%20If%20you%20revealed%20at%20least%203%20Treasure%20cards%2C%20%2B%20%241.%0A-%0AWhen%20you%20buy%20this%2C%20you%20may%20trash%20a%20Treasure%20card%20you%20have%20in%20play%20to%20gain%20a%20Treasure%20costing%20exactly%20%243%20more%20than%20it.&type=Action&price=%245&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2F736x%2F71%2Fc9%2Ffb%2F71c9fb229f3fec6c02ad18bbeeebcb38.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Troglodyte Caves (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Troglodyte%20Caves&description=%2B1%20Card%0A%2B1%20Action%0ADiscard%20any%20number%20of%20cards%2C%20then%20draw%20that%20many.%0A-%0AWhen%20you%20gain%20this%2C%20you%20may%20reveal%20a%20card%20costing%20less%20than%20this%2C%20to%20gain%20a%20copy%20of%20it.&type=Action&price=%245&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2F236x%2F83%2Fa9%2F1d%2F83a91d8ac91359b28d24628c1a4baea4.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Mortuary (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Mortuary&description=%2B1%20Action%0ALook%20through%20your%20discard%20pile.%20You%20may%20trash%20a%20card%20from%20your%20discard%20pile%20or%20hand.%0A-%0AWhile%20this%20is%20in%20play%2C%20when%20you%20trash%20a%20card%20costing%20at%20least%20%242%2C%20%2B1%20Card.&type=Action&price=%245&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2F1.bp.blogspot.com%2F-KN0h_0aOnAM%2FUkRiuOWLWjI%2FAAAAAAAAn0s%2Fq3TJGY2v30g%2Fs1600%2Ftombstones_at-graveyard-at-full-moon.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Renovate (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Renovate&description=Trash%20a%20card%20from%20your%20hand.%20You%20may%20gain%20a%20card%20costing%20up%20to%20%241%20more%20than%20the%20trashed%20card%20to%20your%20hand.%20If%20the%20gained%20card%20is%20an%20Action%2C%20play%20it.&type=Action&price=%244&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fi.guim.co.uk%2Fimg%2Fstatic%2Fsys-images%2FGuardian%2FPix%2Fpictures%2F2014%2F7%2F2%2F1404311974988%2FCrown-copyright--009.jpg%3Fw%3D300%26q%3D55%26auto%3Dformat%26usm%3D12%26fit%3Dmax%26s%3D448d3752818e1087844602857b069394&color0=0&color1=0)
Recycle (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Recycle&description=Trash%20a%20card%20from%20your%20hand.%20Gain%20a%20card%20costing%20up%20to%20%242%20more%2C%20setting%20it%20aside%20face-down.%20At%20the%20start%20of%20your%20next%20turn%2C%20put%20that%20card%20into%20your%20hand%20and%20trash%20a%20card%20from%20your%20hand%20to%20gain%20a%20card%20costing%20up%20to%20%241%20more%20than%20it.&type=Action%20-%20Duration&price=%245&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fvignette2.wikia.nocookie.net%2Fflippr%2Fimages%2Fb%2Fb0%2FRecycle_plant_medieval.png%2Frevision%2Flatest%3Fcb%3D20150717213905&color0=4&color1=0)
Observatory (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Observatory&description=%2B1%20Action%0ATrash%20a%20card%20from%20your%20hand.%20Look%20at%20one%20card%20from%20your%20deck%20per%20%24%20it%20cost.%20You%20may%20put%20one%20of%20them%20into%20your%20hand%20and%20discard%20any%20number%20of%20the%20others.%20Put%20the%20rest%20back%20in%20any%20order.&type=Action&price=%242&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimg03.deviantart.net%2Fb712%2Fi%2F2011%2F166%2F6%2Fc%2Fobservatory_room_by_justaman78-d39ix8d.jpg&color0=0&color1=0) seems a bit too similar to Raze.
Prefecture (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Prefecture&description=Reveal cards from your deck until you reveal a Victory card. If you do%2C put it and one other revealed card into your hand. Discard the rest.%0A-%0A2%25&type=Action - Victory&price=%245&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.gojapango.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2016%2F07%2Fnormal_IMG_1887.jpg&color0=2&color1=1)
Landlord (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Landlord&description=%2B2%20Cards%0AYou%20may%20discard%20a%20Victory%20card%20for%20%2B1%20Action.%0A-%0AWorth%201%25%20per%20empty%20Supply%20pile.&type=Action%20-%20Victory&price=%245&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2F236x%2F3e%2Fca%2Fcd%2F3ecacd92d904e3e0e4da2b568a02648d.jpg&color0=2&color1=1)
Storyteller --> Bard (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Bard&description=%2B1%20Card%0AIf%20this%20is%20the%20first%20time%20you%27ve%20played%20a%20Bard%20this%20turn%2C%20%2B1%20Action.%0A-%0AWhile%20this%20is%20in%20play%2C%20when%20you%20play%20an%20Action%20card%20you%20don%27t%20already%20have%20a%20copy%20of%20in%20play%2C%20%2B1%20Action.&type=Action&price=%244&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.bigskywords.com%2Fuploads%2F1%2F2%2F8%2F0%2F12804055%2F9711312_orig.png%3F356&color0=0&color1=1)
Incantation (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Incantation&description=%2B1%20Card%0A%2B1%20Action%0ATrash%20a%20card%20from%20your%20hand.%20If%20you%20do%2C%20reveal%20cards%20from%20the%20top%20of%20your%20deck%20until%20you%20reveal%20a%20card%20that%20costs%20more%20and%20shares%20a%20type%20(Action%2C%20Attack%2C%20etc.)%20with%20it%2C%20putting%20it%20into%20your%20hand%20and%20discarding%20the%20rest.&type=Action&price=%243%5E&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fdncache-mauganscorp.netdna-ssl.com%2Fthumbseg%2F1812%2F1812793-bigthumbnail.jpg&color0=0&color1=1)
Research (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Research&description=Trash%202%20cards%20from%20your%20hand.%20Gain%20a%20card%20costing%20exactly%20%242%20or%20%241%5E%20more%20than%20the%20total%20cost%20in%20%24%20of%20the%20trashed%20cards.%0A-%0AWhen%20you%20gain%20this%2C%20gain%20an%20Action%20card%20costing%20up%20to%20%244.&type=Action&price=%241%5E&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Ffantasy-faction.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2014%2F02%2F2014-FEB-Stereotypes-Scientist-by-Florian-Stitz-214x300.jpg&color0=0&color1=1)
Druid (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Druid&description=%2B1%20Card%0A%2B1%20Action%0AChoose%20one%3A%20%2B%20%242%3B%20or%20%2B%20%5E%0A-%0AWhen%20you%20buy%20this%2C%20trash%20all%20Treasure%20cards%20you%20have%20in%20play.&type=Action&price=%244%5E&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2F736x%2F24%2F5e%2Fa0%2F245ea00febba91b2e9a17deac9440bd2.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Elixir (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Elixir&description=%2B1%20Action%0A%2B1%20Buy%0A%2B%20%241%0AReveal%20cards%20from%20the%20top%20of%20your%20deck%20until%20you%20reveal%20a%20Potion%20or%20a%20card%20with%20%5E%20in%20its%20cost%2C%20putting%20it%20into%20your%20hand%20and%20discarding%20the%20rest.&type=Action&price=%243%5E&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fvignette3.wikia.nocookie.net%2Ffinalfantasy%2Fimages%2F4%2F44%2FMOBIUS_Elixir.jpg%2Frevision%2Flatest%3Fcb%3D20150430123326&color0=0&color1=0)
Enclave (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Enclave&description=%2B2%20Actions%0AYou%20may%20discard%20your%20hand%20for%20%2B1%20Card%20per%20Action%20card%20you%20have%20in%20play.&type=Action&price=%242%5E&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.vgblogger.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2FGames%2FEnclaveShadowsOfTwilight%2FEnclaveShadowsOfTwilight_Artwork_0003.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Barber (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Barber&description=%2B1%20Action%0AChoose%20one%3A%20Discard%20any%20number%20of%20cards%20and%20take%20a%20Coin%20token%20per%20card%20discarded%3B%20or%20pay%20any%20number%20of%20Coin%20tokens%20for%20%2B1%20Card%20each.&type=Action&price=%244&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Ffactfile.org%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2015%2F05%2FFacts-about-Barber-Surgeons.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Porter (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Porter&description=%2B1%20Card%0A%2B1%20Action%0AYou%20may%20put%20any%20number%20of%20cards%20from%20your%20hand%20on%20top%20of%20your%20deck.%0A-%0AWhen%20you%20buy%20this%2C%20you%20may%20overpay%20for%20it%20to%20set%20aside%20a%20number%20of%20cards%20from%20the%20top%20of%20your%20deck%20equal%20to%20the%20%24%20you%20overpaid%2C%20putting%20those%20cards%20into%20your%20hand%20at%20the%20start%20of%20your%20next%20turn.&type=Action&price=%242%2B&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.worldsofimagination.co.uk%2FAdner_Spitzweg_Ganzfigur.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Dancer (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Dancer&description=%2B1%20Card%0ATake%20a%20Coin%20token.%20You%20may%20pay%20any%20number%20of%20Coin%20tokens%20for%20%2B1%20Action%20each.%0A-%0AWhen%20you%20gain%20this%2C%20take%20a%20Coin%20token.&type=Action&price=%244&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.oslomagedans.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2015%2F01%2Fbelly-dance.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Royal Guard (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Royal%20Guard&description=%2B1%20Action%0AChoose%20one%3A%20Take%20a%20Coin%20token%3B%20or%20pay%20any%20number%20of%20Coin%20tokens%20for%20%2B%20%242%20each.%0A-%0AWhen%20any%20player%20(including%20you)%20plays%20an%20Attack%20card%2C%20you%20may%20discard%20this%20from%20your%20hand%20to%20take%202%20Coin%20tokens.&type=Action%20-%20Reaction&price=%243&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimg15.deviantart.net%2F44a0%2Fi%2F2014%2F151%2F8%2F4%2Froyal_guard_by_spartank42-d7kfs7i.png&color0=3&color1=0)
Town Hall (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Town%20Hall&description=%2B3%20Actions%0A-%0AWhen%20you%20buy%20this%2C%20you%20may%20overpay%20for%20it%2C%20to%20choose%20a%20number%20of%20cards%20you%20have%20in%20play%20equal%20to%20the%20%24%20you%20overpaid.%20For%20each%20chosen%20card%2C%20if%20you%20discard%20it%20this%20turn%2C%20put%20it%20on%20top%20of%20your%20deck.&type=Action&price=%242%2B&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Faie-guild.org%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2013%2F11%2F020.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Magic Lamp (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Magic%20Lamp&description=Gain%20an%20Action%20card%20costing%20up%20to%20%244%2C%20playing%20it.%0A%0A(This%20is%20not%20in%20the%20Supply)&type=Action%20-%20Prize&price=%240*&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2F564x%2F46%2Fce%2Fcd%2F46cecd9ccf0bf491f5ab878cedf215fe.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Stalwart Mule (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Stalwart%20Mule&description=%2B4%20Actions%0AGain%20a%20card%20costing%20up%20to%20%241%20per%20unused%20Action%20you%20have%20(Action%2C%20not%20Action%20card).%0A%0A(This%20is%20not%20in%20the%20Supply)&type=Action%20-%20Prize&price=%240*&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fcountrystoregallery.com%2Fjoeraderrobertspackmuleindesert.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Servicemen (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Servicemen&description=%2B1%20Action%0ATrash%20a%20card%20from%20your%20hand%20to%20gain%20a%20card%20costing%20up%20to%20%243%20more%20to%20your%20hand.%0A%0A(This%20is%20not%20in%20the%20Supply)&type=Action%20-%20Prize&price=%240*&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.freewebs.com%2Fvowcampaign%2FTheEmpire.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Golden Hammer (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Golden%20Hammer&description=Trash%20a%20card%20from%20your%20hand%20to%20gain%20a%20card%20costing%20up%20to%20%244%20more.%0A%0A(This%20is%20not%20in%20the%20Supply)&type=Action%20-%20Prize&price=%240*&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fsynoptek.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2013%2F08%2FGolden_Hammer.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Wizard (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Wizard&description=%2B1%20Card%0A%2B1%20Action%0AIf%20this%20is%20the%20first%20Action%20card%20you%27ve%20played%20this%20turn%2C%20%2B2%20Cards.%20Otherwise%2C%20%2B2%20Actions.%0A%0A(This%20is%20not%20in%20the%20Supply)&type=Action%20-%20Prize&price=%240*&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Forig03.deviantart.net%2F7024%2Ff%2F2016%2F086%2F8%2Fb%2Fwizard_overlord_by_88grzes-d9woys6.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Royal Tutor (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Royal%20Tutor&description=You%20may%20play%20an%20Action%20card%20from%20your%20hand%2C%20to%20play%20another%20Action%20card%20from%20the%20Supply%20costing%20at%20most%20the%20same.&type=Action&price=%245&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2F564x%2Fe1%2F0d%2Fe5%2Fe10de5ac442f6d45cf6ff9b520be06b5.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Fishmonger (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Fishmonger&description=%2B1%20Buy%0A%2B%20%241%0AAt%20the%20start%20of%20your%20next%20turn%3A%0A%2B1%20Card%0A%2B1%20Action&type=Action%20-%20Duration&price=%244&preview=&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.londonfoodfilmfiesta.co.uk%2FArtmai~1%2Fimages~2%2Ffishshop-snyders%25209(arge).jpg&color0=4&color1=0)
Collector (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Collector&description=%2B1%20Action%0AYou%20may%20play%20a%20Treasure%20card%20from%20your%20hand.%0ADraw%20until%20you%20have%204%20cards%20in%20hand.%0AEach%20other%20player%20may%20discard%20a%20card.&type=Action&price=%244&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2F236x%2F99%2Ffe%2Faf%2F99feaff81c92a7aa1e9a42ff64ce2b18.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
Tinker (http://shemitz.net/static/dominion3/?title=Tinker&description=%2B1%20Buy%0A%2B%20%241%0AWhen%20you%20buy%20or%20play%20this%2C%20you%20may%20trash%20a%20Copper%20from%20your%20hand%20to%20gain%20a%20Silver.&type=Action&price=%243&preview=&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fs-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%2F564x%2F53%2Faa%2F24%2F53aa24d507a8ea9072715d9cb3b4be5f.jpg&color0=0&color1=0)
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Nice! I appreciate you going through and providing alternate versions of the cards I did and doing some of the rest. A few notes:
-The art you picked for indulgences is fine I guess, but I don't really think it fits the given name.
-Metropolis wasn't actually a winner, but I was going to mock it up anyway sometime so thanks.
-I changed Mortuary based on some feedback (It's more dark-ages if it can trash Shelters), but it's nice to have the original too.
-There's already a card named Renovate in the Treasure chest FYI, it's an Event. I don't know if you care.
-Observatory is strictly worse than Raze. I mean I can't and wouldn't stop you from using it just IDK who would.
-Prefecture I did under (very slightly) a different name.
-I already did Storyteller under the name Ehalcyon suggested (I may have tweaked it?).
-Asper still has his mock-up of Incantation. No offense but I think it's better, and it's the creator's mock-up.
-I have a mock-up for Elixir if you care.
-Barber did originally cost (http://wiki.dominionstrategy.com/images/thumb/2/2a/Coin4.png/16px-Coin4.png), but play with it and you'll realize that it doesn't work there at all. (http://wiki.dominionstrategy.com/images/thumb/7/7d/Coin5.png/16px-Coin5.png) is a good price.
-I mocked up the Prizes too if you care.
All in all, I think it's great that you did the cards that lost the run-off. Some of the differences from mine (Barber at (http://wiki.dominionstrategy.com/images/thumb/2/2a/Coin4.png/16px-Coin4.png), Recycle's name, Bard's name, etc.) were all changed based on some feedback from the community. I'd suggest you into that. A few cards (Elixir, the Prizes, Incantation) already have suitable mock-ups that are less typoed. I just don't see the point of redoing them other than to keep them consistent with your other cards.
Finally, I really don't want you to take this as "You suck my mock-ups are better and more official/important/awesome." Sorry if it comes across that way. IDK if it does but just making sure so I don't start any flame wars ;D.
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Nice! I appreciate you going through and providing alternate versions of the cards I did and doing some of the rest. A few notes:
-The art you picked for indulgences is fine I guess, but I don't really think it fits the given name.
-Metropolis wasn't actually a winner, but I was going to mock it up anyway sometime so thanks.
-I changed Mortuary based on some feedback (It's more dark-ages if it can trash Shelters), but it's nice to have the original too.
-There's already a card named Renovate in the Treasure chest FYI, it's an Event. I don't know if you care.
-Observatory is strictly worse than Raze. I mean I can't and wouldn't stop you from using it just IDK who would.
-Prefecture I did under (very slightly) a different name.
-I already did Storyteller under the name Ehalcyon suggested (I may have tweaked it?).
-Asper still has his mock-up of Incantation. No offense but I think it's better, and it's the creator's mock-up.
-I have a mock-up for Elixir if you care.
-Barber did originally cost (http://wiki.dominionstrategy.com/images/thumb/2/2a/Coin4.png/16px-Coin4.png), but play with it and you'll realize that it doesn't work there at all. (http://wiki.dominionstrategy.com/images/thumb/7/7d/Coin5.png/16px-Coin5.png) is a good price.
-I mocked up the Prizes too if you care.
All in all, I think it's great that you did the cards that lost the run-off. Some of the differences from mine (Barber at (http://wiki.dominionstrategy.com/images/thumb/2/2a/Coin4.png/16px-Coin4.png), Recycle's name, Bard's name, etc.) were all changed based on some feedback from the community. I'd suggest you into that. A few cards (Elixir, the Prizes, Incantation) already have suitable mock-ups that are less typoed. I just don't see the point of redoing them other than to keep them consistent with your other cards.
Finally, I really don't want you to take this as "You suck my mock-ups are better and more official/important/awesome." Sorry if it comes across that way. IDK if it does but just making sure so I don't start any flame wars ;D.
Thanks for the feedback. What typos were in my mockups?
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Generally, a comma is needed before the "to", i.e. ", to". There were a few more, but mainly due to the Fan card generator.